Thursday, March 9, 2017

Descriptive Essay

The backyard is the most relaxing and enjoyable area of any one's house. The combination of a swing, a gathering table, and a variety of flowers creates this scenery of tea time in some rich European country. But, for some reason, it just doesn't apply to us-- an Asian family. On a warm and sunny day, I decided that it would be a nice idea to spend a bit of the afternoon just chilling in the backyard, so I happily walked towards the door in the kitchen which leads me to the backyard. I was expecting that the moment  I open that door, I would be seeing a scene as those shown in the movies: blue sky, birds flying and chirping, green grass, and flowers blooming across the entire garden. My imaginations shattered as my neighbor's dog let out its terrifying bark-- for some reasons, it doesn't seem to like anyone else besides its owners. To make the matters even worse, as I walked down the wooden deck, right in front of my eyes was just a complete mess. The moment I stepped onto the ground, a smell of dirt and rotten produce approached me. I then walked further into the garden; all that I could've seen were a mixture of variety of veggies, and other produce grown from seeds. As I walk closer to the half dead cherry tree, I feel the stems from the squashes-which have overlapped each other- stabbing onto my skin. Getting out is my only option now or I will just get stuck in the middle of all these green monsters. But getting out was harder a job than I imagined it would be. I spent quite a bit of time trying my best to get out of this mess and when I finally got out, I came out with mosquito bites all over the skin of mine that was not covered with clothing. I walked backed towards my house passing by the messing garden and feeling all annoyed and itchy at the same time. As I walked up the wooden deck and before I reached the door, I turned back and questioned myself for a second. I remember my self asking, is this really a backyard? With no doubt this is my backyard but it is just a bit unique compared to other backyards. I thought to myself that some day it will be like other backyards but I figured that that some day will never come.

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  2. The dominant impression is disappointed. In order to achieved this, Yiming used concreted diction to describe her backyard. For example, she discussed that, "a smell of dirt and rotten produce approached me." The word rotten suggested how this unpleasant smell strongly contrast from her imaginations of an European garden that surrounds with fragrance of flowers. Also, she utilized imagery, "I will just get stuck in the middle of all these green monsters." She portrayed the green veggies as monsters to demonstrates that how dirty and messy this backyard was. It depicted an irksome image that contradicts the background she was hoping to get and further exemplified her dissatisfactions.

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